Life in technicolor
There's a wild wind blowing down the corner of my street
Every night there the headlights are glowing
There's a cold war coming on the radio, I heard
Baby, it's a violent world
Oh love, don't let me go
Won't you take me where the street lights glow?
I could hear rain coming, I could hear the sirens sound
Now my feet won't touch the ground
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Time came a-creeping, oh, and time's a loaded gun
Every road is a ray of light
It goes on, time only can lead you on
Still, it's such a beautiful night
Oh love, don't let me go
Won't you take me where the street lights glow?
I can hear rain coming like a serenade of sound
Now my feet won't touch the ground
Gravity, release me
And don't ever hold me down
Now my feet won't touch the ground
My Lyrics
It shouldn’t exist the war,
Oh baby let me go with you ,
Let me die with you,
Oh please let me go.
It is a day that no one miss,
Is the day that never have to come,
Is that day when the people dies,
If I have to die with you I will do.
If you have good luck you,
A lord will take you,
Everybody know when is going to come,
Everybody knows when is going to finish,
The war is the only exit that,
That the men know but ,
There is other exit not war not violence,
So sing with me sing for the other exit,
The war is the only exit that,
That the men know but ,
There is other exit not war not violence,
So sing with me sing for the other exit,
And the sun will become gray,
Because this war…
Closing time
Closing time - time for you to go out, go out into the world.
Closing time - turn the lights up over every boy and every girl.
Closing time - one last call for alcohol, so finish your whiskey or beer.
Closing time - you don't have to go home but you can't stay here.
I know who I want to take me home.
I know who I want to take me home.
I know who I want to take me home.
Take me home...
Closing time - time for you to go back to the places you will be from.
Closing time - this room won't be open 'til your brothers or you sisters
come.
So gather up your jackets, and move it to the exits - I hope you have found
a
friend.
Closing time - every new beginning comes from some other beginning'send.
Yeah, I know who I want to take me home.
I know who I want to take me home.
I know who I want to take me home.
Take me home...
Closing time - time for you to go back to the places you will be from...
I know who I want to take me home.
I know who I want to take me home.
I know who I want to take me home.
Take me home...
Closing time - every new beginning comes from some other beginning'send…
My Lyrics
Tell me baby what's your story
Where you come from
And where you wanna go this time
Tell me lover are you lonely
The thing we need is
Never all that hard to find
Tell me baby what's your story
Where do you come from
And where you wanna go this time
You're so lovely are you lonely
Giving up on the innocence you left behind
This is the story of a girl,
Who wants all to her,
But she made a istake,
Was the ambiscius.
She was like that, but I love her,
When she smiles with her cloths,
Her beautiful cloths,
This is the story of a girl.
Sometimes you are dirty,
But I know that someyimes you rememeber me,
Like the valentine’s day,
With a violet hill.
Tell me baby what's your story
Where do you come from
And where you wanna go this time
You're so lovely are you lonely
7 comentarios:
it is a very good song because the love in a song is very sentimental
and because it describes how was thet girl he likes this song was very creative.
This song makes me feel happy, it represents how the world should be, And I love the creativity. But I didn`t understand if in this song you where in love? But in the other way it is good.
I LIKE THE CREATIVITY THAT YOU USE ON THIS SONG AND HOW YOU GIVE RITHOM TO YOUR SONG ESPECIALLY I LIKE THE SECOND PARAGRAPH BECAUSE YOU MAKE USE OF DIFFERENT WORDS THAT IN ONE PARRAGRAHP MAKES SENCE.
I belive the firt original lyric is the best well I love the language you, use words like war, time to close up that tell us what we are living.
The lyrics are well done but theree are sirious mistakes done, like:
"who wants all to her"
the correction that i will do is this:
"who wants all FOR her"
Also you mistake or forgot to put some letters, were they correspond to be
like:
istake
someyimes
the last corrections are the spelling for words like ambicious, because you write ambiscius also a correction for cloths maybe you mean clothes.improve it and keep working, that were the only mistakes i saw. GOOD WORK!!!!
Santa I like your song but I have to tell you you have some mistakes, or maybe I do not understant:
''Is that day when the people dies''
The final S on dieS has a grammar mistake.
It is: ''Is that day when the people die''
Other thing that I dont understant is: ''A lord will take you,
Everybody know when is going to come''
It is: A lord will take you, Everybody know when is HE going to come''
I dont see other mistakes, keep going Santa :)
Well lokking at the song i saw some mistakes of coherence, because at the begining of the song is anyone can confuse at least you add question marks.Also ant the end of the song you should erase with a violet hill because it is like irrelevant and does not follow the topic and rhytym of the song.
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