Water is the best thing of the world,
she is your best friend,
so please take care of water
or you will die, ooo will die.
Please take care of her,
don't waste more water any more,
you have to help the world with water,
so you can live.
The world need your help,
take care of her in you house,
or in the school in every part, ooo (BIS)
the water needs your help.
The water is all in the world,
more than money or anything else,
without water all the world will die,
like in Africa nanananananaa.
In your hands are the future of the world,
if you want to continue alife,
take care of water.
So I said that the water is more important,
than money so please take care of water,
and a drop is more than you think.
2 comentarios:
The lyrics are well done but theree are sirious mistakes done,like:
"who wants all to her"
the correction that i will do is this
"who wants all FOR her"
Also you forgot to put some letters, were they correspond to be
like:
istake
someyimes
finally the last correction is the spelling for words like ambicious, because you write ambiscius also a correction for cloths maybe you mean clothes.improve it and keep working, that were the only mistakes i saw. GOOD WORK!!!!
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